Kye Kurion

Rookie (September 15 / Vallejo)

Not Like A Child's Spring - Poem by Kye Kurion

Wish I could spend my days ignorant to the world.
Because my complex thoughts always keep me down.
I use to think it was nice when boys complimented girls,
But now that I know, I can't help but frown.

Trying new things use to be so positive,
But that was a long time ago.
So much disease and early dying,
I wish I did not know.

Still in the dark light of life,
I can look forward to good weather.
Yes, all there is are happy Springs,
Springs, but nothing better.


Comments about Not Like A Child's Spring by Kye Kurion

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/19/2008 11:41:00 PM)


    Commendable work, Kye. Well metred, and structurally mellifluous movement.
    You speak of change & hope as you allude to Spring....Life can somewhat be confluenced with seasons, in the vein of change, & renaissance....both of which your message here clearly speaks of....Job well done!

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008..
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  • (4/15/2008 12:11:00 AM)


    Springs, yes, and the springing of hope, leading to gentle Summers. But life is not only about seasons, just as you say, so perhaps life is about hope for the future - and more importantly, taking the time and effort to make those hopes come alive! A nice, gentle poem. Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 14, 2008



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