Not Like A Child's Spring Poem by Kye Kurion

Not Like A Child's Spring



Wish I could spend my days ignorant to the world.
Because my complex thoughts always keep me down.
I use to think it was nice when boys complimented girls,
But now that I know, I can't help but frown.

Trying new things use to be so positive,
But that was a long time ago.
So much disease and early dying,
I wish I did not know.

Still in the dark light of life,
I can look forward to good weather.
Yes, all there is are happy Springs,
Springs, but nothing better.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Commendable work, Kye. Well metred, and structurally mellifluous movement. You speak of change & hope as you allude to Spring....Life can somewhat be confluenced with seasons, in the vein of change, & renaissance....both of which your message here clearly speaks of....Job well done! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Ivan Donn Carswell 15 April 2008

Springs, yes, and the springing of hope, leading to gentle Summers. But life is not only about seasons, just as you say, so perhaps life is about hope for the future - and more importantly, taking the time and effort to make those hopes come alive! A nice, gentle poem. Rgds, Ivan

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