Not Today Poem by Gloria Noveron

Not Today



I remember feeling broken.
His glare which will always stay.
When I asked him if he loved me,
his reply was, 'Not today.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 17 April 2009

Not today and maybe, just maybe...not tomorrow.

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Tyler Smith 21 April 2009

This is very powerful. Succinct, but yet retains the essence of what you're trying to say. Beautiful poem Gloria!

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Ariel Rousseau 21 April 2009

Wow that was sad....

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Elizabeth Middleton 19 April 2009

I know that movie! The Prestige! I don't know if that's where you got your inspiration, but that's what I thought of when I saw it: -) Well done!

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Angel Uchiyama 19 April 2009

Hey Gloria. Great poem, few words that say everything. I liked it a lot. You should become a writer. I would buy your books. =)

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Leslie Neiwert 17 April 2009

First things first, I like the poem; makes me want to serously kick some guy's boo-tae! ! ! ! ! Second, who the heck does Jane Tevar? ? ? She honestly needs to be more sensitive about your feelings, Gloria. lol sooooo anywho.... The poem was great, stanza was short, and I have a feeling you had me read this in class. Cause I swear I've seen it somewhere. You've got the tone perfect for this, and the expectance of the reader is hanging onto your every word. Quite, quite bravo, my dear.

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