Not with futility
It gives false impression
When writer is left with illusion
He may think otherwise
For his write up wise
Only write up should be praised
And his level is automatically raised
He need not ask for comments
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So if some impartial reader comments to his discomfort
He remains upset
As why has he written harshly?
Whereas it deserved some points adversely
As soon as you have handed over poem for circulation
You are ending an association
It becomes property in public domain
You forget about what position you maintained
So depend upon your capability to write
Ignite new passion daily and fight
You shall gain popularity
But not feeling in vain or with futility
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This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
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