Nothing More Poem by Robert Eclipse

Nothing More

Rating: 5.0


We are just freinds now
And nothing more
I remember still how
We never used to bore
We would talk away
Past the point where
The sun would decay
T'was something in the air
Neither of us sure what
Happy with what we had
And what we've got
We never really felt mad
Towards one another
Maybe cuz we loved each other

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tammie Aimson 01 October 2012

Hi there Eclipse. again this is a lovely poem, are you sure you've never been in love cuz these words are pritty meaningful. it's very beautiful. i liked reading this poem my friend even liked it but what is there not? keep up the work. xx Tamara Lil-Aimo Challinor.

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Kaila George 04 July 2012

I like this, not sure what it is when you meet someone, but in reading the poem, it says love.

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Freddy Ibarra 04 July 2012

A very interesting point of view and word used. Well done.

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