Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Nothings I Love. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Nothings often amaze and enthral me.
Show me an awareness, momentarily.
Share with me wonder, and oftentimes
Leave me in awe, able to see behind
Reason for joy in blackbird's springsong,
Or scent of yellow rosebud, blown along
The lane, a fallen leaf in autumn, rarely
Seen flowers, the feel of wind in my hair.
Sightings of stars, trails of bonfire smoke.
Dogs at their play, sea-shells when soaked.
The sound of laughter, baby; s sweet smile.
All sorts of nothings, but all so beguiling.
Warmth for the heart, composed of smallest
Significance, 'no-things' still sing life best.


Comments about Nothings I Love. by Fay Slimm

  • Mark Nwagwu (12/29/2009 3:19:00 AM)


    All sorts of nothings, but all so beguiling.
    Warmth for the heart, composed of smallest
    Significance, 'no-things' still sing life best.



    Fay, you stepped into my soul and came out with this work - it captures my mind completely - the littlest things attract me a lot - the 'nothings'. fantastic, Fay; philosophical, captures the true meaning of our human nature
    mark
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  • (12/23/2009 12:07:00 PM)


    wonderful the smallest nothing can mean so much loverly 10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 23, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, January 8, 2010


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