Nuisance (Senryu) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Nuisance (Senryu)



industrious fly
tasting my food on the sly?
please find your own plate

© 2016

Friday, September 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 02 September 2016

They seem to prefer drowning in my iced tea here. I have accidentally consumed more than a few this summer. : -O

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Guru Kothandaraman 02 September 2016

Creative and flows beautifully, perfect topic for 17 syllables magic!

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Gil Highlander 02 September 2016

Loved this one Govind. Nice work

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Stephen Park 02 September 2016

Ha ha ha... Nice humor and a simple event turned into a great Senryu....

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