Sunday, June 2, 2019

O Brave Bird Chatak Comments

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O brave bird Chatak, be firm of mind,
Be thou not to this friend's words blind.
Many a clouds there be in sky,
Not all seem for thee to ply—
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Dr Antony Theodore 02 June 2019

Many a clouds there in the sky, But all are not as seen well nigh. Some shower rain quenching the earth, Some thunder idly, vain their worth. A very fine poem and your great imagination dear Aniruddha. tony

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 June 2019

Thank you Dr Antony, real credit goes to Bhartrihari.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2019

'No words of pity'! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 June 2019

Yes, you've picked up the key words, thanks dear poet.

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