Sunday, November 25, 2018

O Change The Bait Comments

Rating: 3.8

I wonder if a man must reassure
His wife on each rising sun of his love,
Should his marital bliss northward must move,
Yet, with what alluring fare should he lure?
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 November 2018

For, who has heard of humouring a fish? Any bait's good, long as the fish won't miss......impressive expression with nice theme. It is a beautiful poem having amusing expression with humour. and fun. Full vote.

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 November 2018

Thank you Kumarmani, you're always kind with your comments.

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