O U Make Me So Mad! Poem by angel lockheart

O U Make Me So Mad!

Rating: 5.0


</>Oh, you make me so mad,
All the lies that u spin,
All the horrid thoughts you have had,
You’re just wallowing in sin.

You’re possessive by nature,
But how I wish you would change,
If you could channel all those feeling,
Into only 1 girl,
You’d make their heart sing,
You’d make their breath catch,
You’d make all their fantasy dreams,
Each come to life.

But you’ll never do that,
You’re too set in your ways,
If you tried to change
You’d go back to your revolting habits,
An addict for life,
Yet you’ll never see the trail left behind,
Of broken hearts and shattered souls,
The destructive path that lies in your wake,
Just makes you grin and laugh,
And I just want to shout,
You’re only killing yourself.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 29 October 2008

You are too good for this creep. I really feel it deep down in my heart. You need to find someone who will love you with faithfulness and treasure you for the beautiful person that you are. You will find him I promise.

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**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 24 October 2008

But its not impossable...Beauty..

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Thomas Kurkoski 24 October 2008

Interesting...I personally liked it. The raw emotion....the raw language...fantastic piece! Keep up the good work. Cheers, Thomas

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