Ang3l mine I wish u were here,
I feel so helpless without u near.
If we were together,
My emotions would fly,
I would not be able to tell u goodbye.
To prolong the ending that would rip my heart out,
I’d hold u close and never let go.
Then giving into a temptation I could not understand,
I’d rise on tip toe and raise my hand.
And gently tracing the contours of your face,
I’d finally stop the lifelong race,
And willing to take the chance that you wouldn’t understand,
I slowly lift my other hand,
And tangle it in your hair so fine,
I’d watch your eyes as we stopped all of time.
Slowly tilting my head to fit that of yours,
I’d hesitantly lift my tear stained lips up to yours,
And gently opening my mouth & latch on to your lip,
I’d watch you to see what you would do next.
If you accepted me, and moved your lips against mine,
I never would leave you for all of our time.
But if you didn’t and pushed me away,
My eternal soul would die on that day.
Beautiful romantic poem, , the imagination and the simple words used are painting an amazing picture full of different colors, here again u proved that U're a great talent :)
Definitely a heartfelt write, the theme of love and pain, while dated, will never be jaded. It's beautifully written and demands a place high amongst other bittersweet love poems we read
Beautifully written with a soft touch of a soul and mind of a great artist... I just wonder how this piece would sound if one read it with a Scottish accent...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow...love it..great job.