Oasis Water Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Oasis Water

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It is oasis water
That can not alter
The reality of life and facts
It is only your acts

I am too lost
For the sincerity almost
That you had as treasure
I was very much sure

I knew you were rare species
Brought up among many delicacies
Your heart is pure and clear
I can surely come near

Mind always rushes fast
Not to loose you till last
I hold you in dream arms
As you fear no harm

I had missed something in you
That you were really true
You were very much keen
To come near and crate lovely scene

Saturday, September 28, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: facts
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

Great Vijaya Sarathi Putcha5 minutes ago Ah. It's nicely written. Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

Kyle Hamrick11 minutes ago Very good makes a lot of since

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

It is oasis water That can not alter

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 September 2013

Preeti Sabhar.. Mind always rushes fast Not to loose you till last I hold you in dream arms As you fear no harm

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

Great Vijaya Sarathi Putcha5 minutes ago Ah. It's nicely written. Comment +1 Nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 September 2013

Irene Redmond likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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