Monday, July 16, 2012

Obedient To Subservience Comments

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Obedient to subservience,
Was not intended for all to experience...
To enslave with materialistic wishes dreamed.
A subservience inflicted had been intended to restrict,
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Captain Cur 16 July 2012

The use of repetition and rhyme exemplifies the message contained in this strong poem, statement.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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