Oblivion Poem by Bijita sharma

Oblivion

Rating: 5.0


Evolved from a web,
Fall into a dewdrop.
When I hold it;
It got melt.
I roamed every covert
And returned to my web,
Silent and sobbed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 December 2018

A beautiful creation nicely encapsulated with insight. Thanks for sharing Bijita.

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Bijita Sharma 09 January 2019

Thank you!

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Prabir Gayen 09 January 2019

I roamed every covert And returned to my web, Silent and sobbed.... Quotable line

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Bijita Sharma 09 January 2019

Thank you so much.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 January 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Bijita Sharma. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Jazib Kamalvi 05 January 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Bijita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Prabir Gayen 30 December 2018

got melt. I roamed every covert And returned to my web, Silent and sobbed.

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Prabir Gayen 30 December 2018

Very good poem...short and string....

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