Ocean Glass Poem by GRANT FRASER

Ocean Glass

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Don't turn around
look back,

echoes - never stop!

but you do,

every second splits,

hurdles over you,

dump the past,

ahead of time,

try digesting
everything you
did or didn't do,

doesn't get you

a window
of situations...


Bricks & bars,
gaoler of hearts,

are 'words' the sentence?

so many for an idiot,

but when your in love
with what you haven't
got - it feels better...

oh! rustic whims,
you know when I get out,

I'm gone! !

rocky caverns, puddles
asleep in the night,
deserted beaches,

or whenever some amazing
coloured sky manoeuvres in,
momentarily the simple
things amount to so much
inner treasure,

items sucked out of proportion
strewn along wispy sands,

the shape of a former soul!
who stood where, I don't know,
along some distant shore...

and here I am, my own message,
bobbing up and down in
the world day,

what's to say...the message...

I lost my point, long ago,
on old paper,
from digging in too hard,

veritable hearts get scratched...

Tuesday, March 18, 2014
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 April 2020

Echos never stop and this is very wonderful. Echos motivate life and we feel the truth. Momentarily simple and lovable waves whisper us. Here own message goes up and down. This poem is excellently penned with beauty of motivation. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work.

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Liza Sudina 23 May 2016

Interesting style - even want to hear how you read it aloud.

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Adeline Foster 22 July 2015

Didn't catch on right away, Don't know if I do yet. Interesting riddle. Read mine - O Night - Adeline

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Gajanan Mishra 18 March 2014

a window of situation, I like it, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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Colleen Courtney 18 March 2014

But when you're in love with what you haven't got-it feels better. Oh how often this is so very true! Nice!

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