Carolyn Brunelle

Ode To Gardners - Poem by Carolyn Brunelle

Plants and flowers,
Shrubs and trees
Warmed by the sunshine,
Kissed by the bees.
Ever growing;
Ever green.
Sweetest blooms
We’ve ever seen
Arrive in Spring
With each new breeze;
And dropp us faithfully
To our knees.

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  • (4/2/2008 2:31:00 PM)

    Carolyn - nice work on Ode to Gardeners!

    One suggestion - use the active instead of passive voice

    Dropping us faithfully
    To our knees.................passive

    We dropp faithfully
    To our

    Just a thought! Usually the active indicates action, doing something
    Perhaps though you are overcome by the breeze and brought to your
    knees by its emotional power?
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, June 19, 2009

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