Ode To My Life Poem by Anish mutum

Ode To My Life

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From womb I set out
Passed nurse’s arms and then
The stringent governance of the learning temple.
As I moved on, halted
On the way for something
though aware of many a task ahead
couldn’t help myself staring wide-eyed
at the pulchritude of a vista.

The garden of life it was
Replete with flowers- hues and sents of all kinds.
Bees travail for the best nectar and
no exception I was
setting my heart on a beauteousness.
The travail moved on with me as a part.

After loses, finally came the prize of my utopia.
Unlike most contemporaries mine was a *Lotus
Bloomed on a single stalk
Amid crystals lit by sunbeams.
All at once **zephyr disturbed the tranquility
Slurring if she withers.

***Too long have I enjoyed this transitoriness
But, I have tasks ahead
Tasks to garden my own life
And a pool to create for my Lotus.
Tasks to garden my own life
And a pool to create for my Lotus.

Ode To My Life
Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
#“The stringent governance of the learning temple”- the strict supervision of the school;
#Travail (literary) - situation involving lots of hard work, suffering, etc;
#Slurring – to pronounce words in an unclear way;
#*Lotus- the poet’s sweetheart (lotus blooms on a single stalk. When the poet met her, she was single and the poet was the first person to whom she gave her heart.)
#**zephyr - gust of air, (here, it is the poet’s conscience which makes him aware of the harsh reality of life.)
#“All at once…wither” – the poet’s conscience tells him his beloved will leave him if he keeps enjoying life without working hard;
#Line 11: - “bees…: - males(teenagers) compete for winning girls’ hearts; #Set one’s heart on: - long for
#*** the last six lines “Too long...for my Lotus” means –
the poet has been enjoying the beautiful aspects of life but he comes to realize the harsh reality of life; and that he has lots of work to do- work to achieve his aim, which will make his sweetheart and his family happy in the future life.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 09 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Anish. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Anish Mutum 09 September 2017

thank u 4 reading n ur appreciation sir

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Fabrizio Frosini 12 October 2015

kind of well penned ballade. Useful footnotes. Thanks for sharing, Anish

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Anish Mutum 12 October 2015

thank u for reading and for ur appreciation: -)

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Kelly Kurt 12 October 2015

A lovely poem, Anish. Well conceived and written. Thanks

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Anish Mutum 12 October 2015

thank u so much: -) for ur appreciation

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Anish Mutum 12 October 2015

thanks u so much for ur apprectiation: -)

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