Feeling lonely and unloved
I took a friends advice
I surfed the net until I met
A man I could admire
He was the perfect man for me
He filled me with desire
He courted me with every plea
and filled my soul with fire
Every night and every dawn
Waiting for him to appear
didn’t care how long it took
That he mightn’t, made me fear
He was my lover as well as best friend
I was his heroine, he my hero
Just the wrong word uttered one day
not meant to offend caused him to stray
I miss him more than words can say
I hope he reads this through one day
And maybe, maybe, with hindsight
he will realise I did not slight
In my dreams I roam the moor
Looking for my hero
I wont give up, never let go
When I find him my heart will soar
Only then my soul will heal
Only my woodsman can make me feel
My heart burst into fire
He is the object of my dreams
The object of my desire
This is a truly heartfelt and beautiful piece. Well penned. Internet relationships can be tricky. As with all relationships, but I think internet relationships are harder. We miss so much without being able too see attitudes and expressions. Body language means a lot, and online it we can all be mistaken easily in our perception of the written word. Well penned. I gave it a 10
The searched depth of a woman's heart.. sweet and salient lines mama..cheers and compliments of the season. The Sage Anthony Edmond John +2348020984990
There are two methods a human being activities, one is desire the Brain and the other is obey the Heart, This is really come from your pleasent Heart like a crystal clear cascade, Thanks a lot for the poem, Good 2009.
Pretty good first attempt Laurena, try it in free verse experimentally. Best, Jerry
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A passionate writing for the Woodman lost in the forest of misunderstanding. May he realize and understand your words and come back to your life one day!