Darkness may deepen
Attacks may sharpen
You will be surrounded
Often insulted and offended
Beware of your thoughts
You have already fought
Now it has been sought for
The way to divinity and never to be caught
You are pakizaah*
When I utter Allah
The body can't have shadow
You have all the way to grow
Water may be deep
But to offer your own reflection
Just to show your real action
As what you are with any reaction
* Pakizaah.. Sacred... Holy
Teresa Mahieu2 hours ago I did not really get the meaning of this poem.
Xavier Paolo Josh Ledesma Mandreza2 hours ago I didn't know it could be that Sublime... Comment +1 not sure
i am only nine and i made it up my self i hope you liked it Samanthadawn Daniels1 hour ago will who ever likes it be my friend on facebook. Comment 1 Comment+1 Nicely...
Josh Mathews1 hour ago Kind of negative. Its really deep, but so negative. Comment 2 Comments+1 Interesting
Re: Often insulted (Score: 1) by graphitegirl on Tuesday, September 11,2012 (23: 36: 19) I think the line beware of your thoughts is an interesting line. The poem is interesting at well. I get this persecuted feel from it. Your comments on your poem are also interesting. Great meter in your poem and you do have style.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Darkness may deepen Attacks may sharpen