Oh, My Life You Really Put Me Down Poem by Ulfat Patel

Oh, My Life You Really Put Me Down

Rating: 5.0


Sitting dumb beside sea shore
Along with screaming heart,
That could be no longer to live
Broken into pieces, hard to hold.

Pain bursted out, hurry to flow
As it was caged under ago
Want to be free at all
Feeling all alone, in the silence of nature

There came rain, showing pity
Drops of relief fallen, breaking the silence
Washing pain all over,
Couldn't bear it any more.

I was never known the life is so worst
My dreams will be shattered so soon,
Gave the pain that couldn't heal
Oh, my life you really put me down.

Thursday, March 22, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: broken heart,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ayesha 29 August 2019

Heart touching lines...nice job ..

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Jazib Kamalvi 26 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Ulfat. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 24 March 2018

Verily, a lovely flow of words describing the facet of life where one has to overcome. 10++

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