My Dear Smile Poem by Ulfat Patel

My Dear Smile

Rating: 5.0


Oh, my dear smile
Be always with me,
I don't wanna show my pain

My pain is so deep,
It's hard to skip
My heart is broken down

Just be on my lips always,
To hold my tears
don't let them fall

Don't act to be frosty,
Don't let me down
My dear smile

Friday, February 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 February 2018

Verily, another lovely poem, keep up your smiles and run in miles

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 09 February 2018

Verily, another lovely poem. Keep up your smiles and run in miles

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Muskan motiwale 09 February 2018

Keep going dear....Nyc one😊

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 February 2018

Your pain is so deep is so sad. But still you smile for others with great perspectives of life. Lovely smile outlines beauty of life and this is really an interesting poem excellently penned....10

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Ummehani korti 09 February 2018

Nice dr

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Jazib Kamalvi 22 March 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Ulfat. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Nayyara 19 February 2018

Oh ho... awesome work Ulfat,keep it up.

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yunus. k 10 February 2018

nice poem.congratulations

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Pallavi sh 09 February 2018

Nice poem.. Congratulations

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rukayya 09 February 2018

Hats off to you dear.

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