Oh Pain Poem by Fred Omorogbe

Oh Pain

Rating: 4.0


Daybreak! , The bathroom door I Face
Frustration dawns my life again
Great hunger strain, Struggles? ... No gain
Oh pain! Oh pain! ! Oh pain! ! !

Wave of woe, nothing to show
Life's spinning wheel, Oiled but not free
Problems so tough... I solve in vain
Oh pain! Oh pain! ! Oh pain! ! !

Everyday, Live like a slave
I'm trapped within my inner cave
Someday...I'll win
When will this be? ...
Oh pain! Oh pain! ! Oh pain! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The pain of pain is so painfull. Painfully profound!

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Ency Bearis 16 January 2009

entrapped to the cell of struggle...of course its painful..well implied write..

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Beth Whittaker 29 January 2009

You have greatly captured a moment of every day in my life. Nicely done.

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Leslie Ching 27 January 2009

the ever-reappearing story of struggle and depression...my classmates and i are currently studying self-esteem in health class, and this is an great example of how personal (and other) preferences can negatively affect one's self-esteem... lc

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Joscelyn Alderdice 26 January 2009

This is something that everyone can relate to. You've done well in capturing your audience :)

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Rory Sixx 20 January 2009

We all experience pain, physical or psychological. I loved the last paragraph.10/10.

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C. P. Sharma 16 January 2009

...followed by woes.... CP

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