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Oh Poor Cardinal (Senryu)

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Oh poor cardinal
Lost its life, highway Fifteen
Hitting my windshield.

The sun is rising
Unlucky bird is flying
My car is running.

Suddenly, I'm sad
Because of dead convergence

Flying bird, running car.
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Sunday, July 31, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: tragedy,bird
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I drove south on highway Fifteen and a cardinal flew onto my windshield. Written as a Haiku then revised as Senryu 5/30/2018.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kimkhue Nguyen 08 August 2016

Your Oh Poor Cardinal Haiku poem is very touching.

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Nhien Nguyen 11 August 2016

Thanks for reading and that you have same feelings.Nhien

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Kim Nguyen 05 August 2016

Thank you for sharing this Haiku poem. I feel sorry for a cardinal too.

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