Old Cottage On The Hill Poem by Amar Agarwala

Old Cottage On The Hill

An old cottage on yonder hill
Thick foliage does conceal,
Which men would find so hard to climb
But never a single wheel.

Mortals having abandoned it
Its future sans any clue,
Present mired in hopelessness
The past having bid adieu.

Its roof had long been blown away
Maiden-hair upon its wall,
The eons having run it down
Its skeleton set to fall.

No smoke hangs by it chimneys quaint
Nor a stranger near its door,
No lights upon its window pane
One did ever see before.

The summer rains do bathe it neat
While the skies stand by its side,
Dense courtyard looked a tangled mess
Purple ivies as their aide.

The sun and moon stand sentinels
Taking turns from dawn to dusk,
A sprightly mist plays hide and seek
With the craggy hill-side brusque.

One never sees a living stir
Nor a dead came down from there,
One spies no neighbour round the hill
‘Twas no reason to despair.

Doubling as a colony
For the bats and owls to stay,
Its yard an altar for the hounds
Who rummage it for their prey.

When glow-worms veil the grassy slopes
Thoughtfully etching a rune,
Moon-flowers prance with ecstasy
With the winds whistling a tune.

The crickets sing a lullaby
Night-jars assembling their trill,
The lonely cottage hibernates
Yet standing atop that hill.

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Old Cottage On The Hill
Friday, April 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness,purple,rains
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
OUR LIVES RESEMBLE OUR HOUSES
I often feel that houses carry a deeper meaning than what is visible with the naked eyes. More so, it says so much about the people it houses, persons and families who stay there. It gets so much easier to know a person and his habits from his/her house - for they bear running testimony about their lives, lifestyles, likes, dislikes, passion and small habits that make them what they are.

This poem by Emily, as always caught my attention from a host of others. For I am so fascinated by old and abandoned houses. I was tempted to copy her as usual, and I did. You need to tell me, if I did a good job out of it. Don't hesitate to criticize, it makes me a better poet.

A HOUSE UPON THE HEIGHT

Emily Dickinson
A House upon the Height—
That Wagon never reached—
No Dead, were ever carried down—
No Peddler's Cart—approached—
Whose Chimney never smoked—
Whose Windows—Night and Morn—
Caught Sunrise first—and Sunset—last—
Then—held an Empty Pane—
Whose fate—Conjecture knew—
No other neighbor—did—
And what it was—we never lisped—
Because He—never told—


As I grow older, I feel, I increasingly resemble an old house. For every ancient house has a mystic past, a haunting present and a future that belies clue. I felt immensely attracted to not just the poem but the picture of the old, abandoned house on the hill-top. It seems to wait for heaven's salvation, much like I do - and I know it will come someday.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 08 April 2016

whichever way you look at it, this poem is a lovely read thanks Amar

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Amar Agarwala 08 April 2016

Dear Loke, Thank you for your inspiring words. Warm Regards!

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