and for a fleeting moment
when viewing each picture
a silent wish quickly expires
I'm quite the opposite, I don't want the moment to be fleeting and I stare at the pictures for a long time wishing time had no expiration date.
You've really captured a lot of feeling here. Your poems make me stop and reflect. You should write more.
I don't know how you manage to say so much with so few words. You have a talent for it.
Interesting thought. I imagine some wishes were benevolent and others malevolent, still others lustful.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Poignant flavor to this piece that is easily recognized by all. Another wonderful write! !