Old Memory Lane Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Old Memory Lane

Rating: 4.9


Sometimes I slipped to old memory lane,
Take me to far off places without sitting in plane,
Happy and old days definitely to be counted,
Let there be so much worry in mind amounted,

I see her almost there when look at the sky?
Take me back to old days I don’t know why?
I had asked her from silver moon,
She came on earth to join me soon,

“What would you prefer tea, coffee or milk?
She was almost there by wearing sari silk,
Graceful eyes with welcome and smile on face,
Was I on hunt or for partner in race?

She was perfect as I had imagined,
Eyes danced as if were wined
But she caught me and I thought may be fined,
If said not then life will be ruined,

All went well with deciding to knot,
proposal through with no fear of “not”
Remained with me for period so long,
She was at her best and never did wrong,

Life with wife gave me delight,
Nothing unusual and path right,
Nothing is missing and going out of sight,
Reminds me of old when look up at light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Argum Sheth 09 August 2009

like alternate life line....10

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Rupa Shah 10 August 2009

manytimes we visit old memory line...10

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Suresh Vakil 11 August 2009

we slip into it whenfree....10

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Chaul Vania 11 August 2009

it is easy way to rememebr infree time....10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 14 August 2009

we slip to old memory lane many times....10

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Ketan Rajgor 22 October 2009

see her almost there when look at the sky? Take me back to old days I don’t know why? I had asked her from silver moon, She came on earth to join me soon,

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Poonam Suthar 21 October 2009

All went well with deciding to knot, proposal through with no fear of “not” Remained with me for period so long,

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Ramdulari Sinha 18 October 2009

Sometimes I slipped to old memory lane, Take me to far off places without sitting in plane, Happy and old days definitely to be counted,

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G Kandoi 17 September 2009

see her almost there when look at the sky? Take me back to old days I don’t know why? I had asked her from silver moon,

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Kunwar Patel 21 August 2009

we love the old memdories....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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