Oldest Bluff...................... Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Oldest Bluff......................

Rating: 5.0


FEEBLE lights,
cluttered rooms,
the tinkling of
sound, like a key
having intercourse
with a broken lock,
stop, drop,
stop, drop,
you heard me, pack
your stuff up, and
fly away, into the
sadness of your
dreams.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
***** ********* 10 February 2006

This gorgeous David. I love the pace of it too. 10 from Call your bluff expert! Tai

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 09 February 2006

'...like a key having intercourse with a broken lock' VERY nice! What a metaphor. But, it's the 'OLDEST BLUFF............. Good write, David. L

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