On A Lonely Mountain Comments
On a lonely mountain
in a far and distant land
lives a man that's seen the world go round
since the world began
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An interesting, fantastical write, Charlie. Great idea about the grains of sand as crimes of mankind. Esther : ]
Wow, this was excellent! I especially loved the ending... but the whole poem is so so well structured and indeed it flows so easily... A 10 from me! ~~Elya Thorn~~
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2/12/2026 2:49:42 AM # 1.0.0
WOW! Charlie - this is one of your best! Liquid flow, and such intensity - says sooooo much. I like your style, as I have always told you. You are exquisitely talented! This deserves a 10 - actually 15 would be more appropriate! Linda