On Passing Through Death Valley In November Poem by Yen Cress

On Passing Through Death Valley In November

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I stood in the vast, silent desert,
Alone, on a winter-bleak night;
Around me the wind blew so fiercely
The stars cast a shimmering light.

The sagebrush and chaparral murmured
In whispers of ghost-swirling sand.
A platinum half-moon crept upward
Past hillocks the sharp wind had fanned.

My arms I raised upward to heaven.
Bright starpoints spread out on display
Like pinholes in blue velvet curtains
That cover the window of day.

I wondered how people imagine
Such glory could happen by chance.
Can't they see the Creator's great wisdom?
His hand made this wondrous expanse!

I threw back my head to the vision
And gulped in the sharp-silky air.
Mere moments I stood in the desert
But eons passed while I was there.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abha Sharma 22 March 2008

The sagebrush and chaparral murmured In whispers of ghost-swirling sand. the lines and wordplay are beautiful..... adjectives used convey a lot silent desert, winter-bleak night... Indeed a beautiful poem

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 30 September 2007

Excellent employment of effulgent imagework, and Meticulous detail...Solid Work. FjcR

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Emancipation Planz 30 September 2007

Hi Yen, yet again you have morphed the every day living with nature so beautifully: 'Like pinholes in blue velvet curtains That cover the window of day.' Keep on sharingxx

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Yen Cress

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