Maria Sudibyo

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On Tears Lonely Lonely Cry - Poem by Maria Sudibyo

On tears lonely lonely cry
You always shade on my mind
Even you had flied away
Left me alone in the night

On tears lonely lonely cry
No one can take that place
My first love you have to know
You’ve never gone in my heart

Oh why, oh why
I can’t forget your kiss goodbye
I want crying to you
Bring this pain from my life

On tears lonely lonely cry
My first love you have to know
The memory was closed
In my broken lonely heart

Comments about On Tears Lonely Lonely Cry by Maria Sudibyo

  • (11/18/2018 7:05:00 PM)

    So sad and Beautiful (Report) Reply

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  • (11/21/2017 5:48:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Thank you, you touched my heart. (Report) Reply

  • Dev Anand (8/21/2017 9:59:00 AM)

    The memory
    In my broken lonely heart..i shall never forget the first kiss, the first love. it shall remain always in me.
    a very fine poem. sweet memories, sadness, sense of l oss and sense of hope.. thank you dear poetess. dev
    (Report) Reply

  • (11/17/2008 5:11:00 PM)

    Very good poem it touched me deep. I like the last part the most really. Beautifull. (Report) Reply

  • Prasetya Utama (10/14/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    Look like from the story of real life of poet.Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • (4/28/2008 12:32:00 AM)

    wow puisi yang indah sekali, saya rasa ini salah satu puisi terbaik yang pernah saya baca mengena dihati dan tidak muluk-muluk, saya beri nilai 10, mohon komentari juga puisi saya yang berjudul a must for love, makasih (Report) Reply

  • (1/24/2008 1:24:00 PM)

    thats a good poem...keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2008 7:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful....u jus put the whole story in this poem very beautiful specially the last stanza..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 1, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011

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