Tuesday, September 18, 2018

On The Beach (Free Verse Sonnet) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Late in the afternoon over the sea
the day poured out the last out of its wineglass,
the bay, the wave is coloured red
when on the beach you do kiss me.
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Gert Strydom
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Mahtab Bangalee 18 September 2018

nicely penned the full intoxication scenery at late afternoon through pure love

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 18 September 2018

What a nice poem of such coinage congratulations

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Gert Strydom

Gert Strydom

Johannesburg, South Africa
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