Thursday, January 25, 2018

On The Concrete Floor Comments

Rating: 4.5

On the concrete floor.
I had no control.
It was freezing.
Stripped.
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SC. Crews
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Jazib Kamalvi 28 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, SC. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Seamus O Brian 28 February 2018

A strongly compelling piece expressing the overwhelming pain of being powerless in a situation of abusive exploitation. Riveting and disturbing, which conveys the difficult truth of such circumstances. Excellent writing, good poet.

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Frank Adie 25 January 2018

A good depiction of a painful memory. Well captured.

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