Sunday, September 24, 2006

On The Way To Heaven... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am being taken to the royal dungeon.
I will be killed there tonight,
For a crime I never committed,
For an action I never thought of.
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Lakshmi Sreedharan
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Rajaram Ramachandran 29 May 2007

This is a miscarriage of justice-an innocent is being hanged. Perhaps, he had killed an innocent man in his previus life for which he paid in this life.

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Raghavan Warrier 07 December 2006

Excellent is the only word with which I can describe your poem.

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Viki Jag 25 October 2006

oh my god! ! ! ! great one from you....such a royal style of english.....exactly expressing the melancholy and irony of the situation...good one

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Caterpillar MC 22 October 2006

this has been my all time favourite...what more to say...

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Nimal Dunuhinga 29 September 2006

They killed an innocent man; but the soul is free to go anywhere? One way it's good that you go to heaven before they make barriers in the sky! A good start Lakshmi...........go ahead.

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