On The Widows' Walk Poem by Sonny Rainshine

On The Widows' Walk

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On the widows’ walk the intoxicating perfume
of early wisteria was blended by the blustery March wind
into her own sachet of jasmine and lavender.

The purple vines themselves, grape-like clusters,
crept up the crisscrossed trellis as if prowling
for the invading scents, to repel or to merge.

Her shawl, which covered her head like a mantilla,
whipped in the wind like an ultramarine banner,
as if a signal or a surrender.

Out there where her eyes transfixed,
were yellow buoys, their desolate bells
clanging like church bells, funereal.

Out there where majestic clipper ships
pierced the line of the horizon
lay a promise of the sea

to return to her what it borrowed
two years and three months ago:
the man who hunted whales

and who was the repository
of her heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 09 November 2007

You paint a wonderful whistful picture. I have always been fascinated by the Widows' Walk; the wind blowing her long dress, the smell of the sea. Delightful subject! Keep writing, you're very good. Marilyn

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Linda Weischedel 09 November 2007

Cool poem, very sharp may I add! Always, Linda

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