On Tree Top Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

On Tree Top

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I was feeling like on tree top
There was no one to stop
The branches were strong
The birds were chirping with like songs

Yes there was reason to feel
I had made inward deal
I was to write more and more
Not about natural objects anymore

Some of the reader friends may encourage
Come forward with pleasant words on page
Sometimes condemn too with no relevance
But I have honor of receiving it at once

It is not important about getting on top
It is also not advisable to stop all of sudden
Only because some one deliberately criticizing
Not out of strict protocol, but with jealousy liked thing

I take it as not person in stride
There are many opinions to divide
Go ahead with whatever you feel strong
There is no possibility of going wrong

Today many readers find me reasonable
That makes me to feel right with rationale
I have ideas and themes that come quite natural
I welcome and execute upon its arrival

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 November 2013

Good Shofi Ahmed3 minutes ago Very well written.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 November 2013

Maria Jaqueline Singlan Sosa likes this. Hasmukh Mehta welxome 2 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 November 2013

I was feeling like on tree top There was no one to stop

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Gajanan Mishra 27 November 2013

no possibility of going wrong, I like it, thanks sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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