Once Was Poem by Lyndsay Thomas

Once Was



You've always been my better half
Always there to make me laugh

Today feels like we're drifting apart
I know it, I can feel it in my heart

You said some things I didn't want to hear
But you made a good point, precise and clear

It always feels like i'm the only one to be blamed
'Our relationship just isn't the same' you claimed

You said 'You distant yourself' because you 'no longer feel important to me'
But I've done the same, I completely agree

We've never had a fight this bad
My heart and mind feel so sad

As I sit here and cry
I look up into the sky

Hoping this isn't the end
Can't we make amends?

Tuesday, February 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: break up
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Forrester 26 February 2014

Well written Lindsay and I know how you feel, been there a few times.

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Nika Mcguin 25 February 2014

Its a topic I'm quite familiar with (have written sloppy verses about lol.) I like that you used very simple rhyme schemes. Sometimes people get so caught up trying to use fancy language that they lose their readers in the midst of it all. A simple, but impacting write, well done. ~NIka

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