Monday, October 13, 2008

One Faded Photo. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Falling swiftly
Through memory's door,
Into a dream
Where deliberately untrod,
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Fay Slimm
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Sandra Fowler 23 November 2008

In every era, love does indeed feel the same/ A very profound thought. Romance is alive and well in this nostalgic poem. Love, SandraX

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Lynda Robson 17 November 2008

Poignant and touching, memories re-surfacing can be bittersweet, Lynda xx

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Kevin Wells 15 October 2008

The ability to be poignant is vital to from-the-heart poetry. Many people are unfortunately heavy-handed in this genre. Not you, however. This is beautifully balanced with just the right amount of sweet sadness as you effortlessly capture a place that we all visit from time to time.

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Hey there... this was exquisitely expressed. upon reading this within my chest between my breasts I felt the warmth of the memories of all the loves gone by: the warm of happiness the warmth of sadness: upon reading this, I felt love!

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Bob Gibson 14 October 2008

Forever young, they stay in our memories forever, there was a reason why, but we may never know it! ; the old adage! it is better to have loved than never to have loved at all! i will take the pain gladly! for i have loved!

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Bob Blackwell 14 October 2008

Lovely memory Fay, sometimes the years fall away for me. Good poem to start my day, thank you for this as we have a grey wet day. Love Bob 10/10

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Fay Slimm

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