One In Six Billion Poem by Jess Terry

One In Six Billion

Rating: 4.8


Okay sorry this isnt probably that good coz i just typed it straight onto the computer. Its kinda spur of the moment.; ]

i never knew forever,
could be so short,
feelings forgotten,
so easily,

You said forever,
And i beleived,

You said you'd be there,
always,
for me

You were my one in six billion,
thought it was real,
but was just so untrue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dislocated Heart 23 February 2008

nice poem... even tho its made up in couple of minutes it not bad. i like it. -Justin

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BEAU GOLDEN 12 February 2008

Well, passionate story. Pain+loss=poetry. We are at 6.65 million now, so 65 million more choices since u last fell in love! ! read Shelley's 'loves philosophy' . beau

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