One Is Too Many Poem by Chen-ou Liu

One Is Too Many

Rating: 3.5


A Haibun

When the fire dies out, she rises, picks up her torn wedding dress from the floor and puts it on inside out. She turns and meets his indifferent gaze. For a moment, silence darkens the room. Finally, she runs out through the back door.

village well at dawn...
the bride penetrating
a winter sky

Sunday, July 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship,suicide,violence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 16 July 2017

She puts on the dress inside out and meets his indifferent gaze. But who is the bride penetrating the winter sky? the sun or the moon? Original imagery!

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