Tuesday, January 8, 2013

One Last Gift Comments

Rating: 5.0

Hubby was so hard to buy for.
He never liked the gifts I gave.
For days after, I would be sore
From his beatings in rant and rave.
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Ima Ryma
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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 May 2021

A true POETESS in her sarcasm. Excellent poem! 5 Stars! To my Favourites!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 May 2021

Now in 2021 it istill un update poem, glory to the women who dare, glory to the woman who dares to free herself from the beatings of ONE man!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 May 2021

Very eerie, very haunting, but IF you are a married person, how must this have ended? ! Otherwse it is very humorous poem and a very pleasant sarcastic. Have enjoyed very much, a true poatess are you!

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Kim Barney 15 December 2014

Gruesome yet funny! I hope the shipping wasn't much money.

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David Mclansky 08 January 2013

This is the clerk at New Windsor FedEx, About your package wrapped with you ex, You used a cheap brand of masking tape, The sticky stuff was out of date And the wrap you used: his peeled skin Started to come off from groin to chin, Could you not send him UPS, We’re having some trouble with his address.

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Gajanan Mishra 08 January 2013

Real nice. thanks. good poem.

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