Sunday, May 31, 2015

One Night One Kiss Everlasting Love Comments

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David Dwayne Edwards
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Dr Antony Theodore 06 June 2016

I close my eyes and feel the breath from your kiss, those soft lips of thee I will forever miss. These stars remind me....... romantic, , passionate and full of life and love.... thank you for this poem.. tony

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Chinedu Dike 01 June 2015

Beautiful love and romantic poem, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart. A good piece indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. ➕9

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Allotey Abossey 01 June 2015

Wow - songs of Solomon 2. You write well my friend and I love it well. God bless you.

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Addy T 01 June 2015

Great poem mate, the emotion is evident. Personally, I think separating it into stanza's gives it a better flow, but it still works quite well in this format.

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Ayman Parray 31 May 2015

Beautiful Poem, David. Thank you for sharing this treasure.

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Kelly Kurt 31 May 2015

~~Memories like this are eternal. Thanks for sharing, David

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