Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 741,554 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

One Object - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Kites were always eager
With almost invisible anger
To present like rainbow
In the form of arrow

To pierce through colors
And establish honor
For supremacy
As rainbow did with beauty

Yes colors represent mood
Simple thought as food
How come colors present nature?
And shape our future

To appear in vacuum and vast horizon
The rainbow has field day to be won
The kite has to reach maximum height
With thread’s help the kite with colors can be right there

It is not only children’s delight
But supreme childhood’s right too
It is taking their fancy to the top
With colors in the form of loop

One object is divine
Others are on ground to draw line
One can not compare
Yet attempt is worthwhile to dare

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 8:08:00 PM)

    welcome remrez mericelel
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 10:57:00 AM)

    Scott Ransopher That was good Hasmukh!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 7:03:00 AM)

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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 4:06:00 AM)

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    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 3:14:00 AM)

    nice


    Sai Krishna5 minutes ago
    good
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 3:14:00 AM)

    well written

    jessica herringa2 minutes ago
    I think I would have to read this a couple times to really understand the meaning of this. Orperhaps it is obvious and I just can't get past my desire to look past the obvious and see the bigger picture, the meaning behind the words. Regardless it is very well written.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 2:55:00 AM)

    Kites were always eager
    With almost invisible anger
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 23, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, April 23, 2014


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