Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 384,069 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Only Desire Will Not Work - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Only desire will not give good start
Feel from inner depth and start
Poetry and emotions start with tears
That speaks of your anguish to bear

Make those feeling to be heard in words
Do nothing and wait for blessings from the lord
Words have powerful impact
That makes you to cry with skill and art

You need no pen and paper
That may be like words on water
It may go away with one fresh wave
Nothing will remain in mind for others to behave

Inject emotions that must look real
Undergone with sufferings while making deal
It may then be felt by others same as you
This is principle when you are writing true

You need not ask how they feel about poems
Let it come in form of few words by them
Simple acceptance of facts may certainly make the space
You may then have satisfaction with bright shine on face


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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 23, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, August 24, 2012


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