Tuesday, October 10, 2017

Only In Memory Comments

Rating: 5.0

When the night comes
and the darkness appears
Come comfort the old people
who shed so many tears
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Dorsey Baker
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Pallab Chaudhury 10 October 2017

they have travelled a long way down the road of life... very nicely penned...10+

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Shakil Ahmed 10 October 2017

yes, those who have passed away, they can show us the right path as they are experienced, nice thoughts, thanks for shading

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 October 2017

In old age people's voices crack into fragile and weak but let them speak slowly. Youth only in memory shine in light of courage of life. Night appears and gives comfort to old aged persons to take rest. and youth become energetic in daylight. A brilliant perceptional poem is shared...10

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