BARBARA ALVARADO

Rookie - 132 Points (POMONA)

Only You Saw - Poem by BARBARA ALVARADO

With all my family around me
Your the only one that took the time to see.
I didn't fool you with my fake smiles on my face
You saw that I was in a deep dark lonely place
If we didn't meet who knows if I would be here today
So I thank god for sending you my way.and I thank you for being there on that very day...
My son inlaw you know who you are...

Topic(s) of this poem: lonely

Form: Acrostic


Comments about Only You Saw by BARBARA ALVARADO

  • Sekharan Pookkat (4/14/2015 3:51:00 AM)


    I didn't fool you with my fake smiles on my face
    You saw that I was in a deep dark lonely place- nice narration- I like it- thanks for sharing
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  • Sekharan Pookkat (4/14/2015 3:50:00 AM)


    I didn't fool you with my fake smiles on my face
    You saw that I was in a deep dark lonely place- nice narration- I like it
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 1, 2015

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 2, 2015


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