luciana isabelle

Open Your Eyes

Open your eyes
To see the world
To see the future
To see the people

Open your eyes
And you might seek
The similarity
The differences
And the changes

Open your eyes
So that you can think
Deeply
Without any mistakes
Without any failure

Open your eyes
And ask
Why?
What?
How?
To let yourself
Be your TRUESELF
Forever…

Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 30, 2013
Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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Comments about Open Your Eyes by luciana isabelle

  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (4/16/2014 7:32:00 PM)

    The note is something special!

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  • Jr CuyamJr Cuyam (10/16/2013 1:40:00 AM)

    this is beautiful. we need to open our eyes for us to see deeply and understand things. good write friend Luci

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  • Khairul AhsanKhairul Ahsan (8/18/2013 6:10:00 PM)

    A well written poem.
    Open your eyes....:
    To let yourself
    Be your TRUESELF
    Forever…
    A good advice.

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  • Luciana IsabelleLuciana Isabelle (8/17/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    mohamad khosravi: thanks for the suggestion....appreciated it so much!

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  • Mohammad KhosraviMohammad Khosravi (8/16/2013 6:02:00 PM)

    Great. i Love this Style of Poems So. and i think it can be better if u USE nature instead world. and picture instead of people.
    like it:
    Open your eyes
    To see the future
    To see the nature
    To see the picture

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  • Indranil BhaduriIndranil Bhaduri (7/8/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Lovely write...keep going

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