Just a little bit more
please stay by my side
I won't be a burden
I won't be a trouble
not anymore
just a little bit more
please do give me a chance
feel the warmth
feel the love
that was meant for me
just a little bit more
please do stay alive
keep on breathing
keep on laughing
keep on smiling
just like you always be
I wonder
Why would you have to suffer?
why would you have to endure?
This fate, this faith?
Don't make me laugh
The clouds are rolling in
The sky looks clearer than ever
I can feel the breeze
But I feel nothing
it was just empty in here
Until now,
it's been like a habit
watching you here
laying on this bad
with the same clothes
with the same look
and with the same YOU
Oh God!
Why must I watch?
When he's here
but he's not here
leaving me alone
in the dark
slowly
to suffer
Oh God!
take mine
instead of him
let him alive
if not forever
than
for just a little bit more
Just a little bit more
For him to sing
For him to smile
For him to laugh
For him to be HIM
and for me to only look
just to look
like he did before
forever...
'for just a little bit more'... That's the crux! A beautiful prayer, well written. Thanks for the notes.
full of emotions, so touching for deep of feeling beautiful poem thanks for sharing
thanks for those who comment.... to Norazah Norddin: thank you for feel the poem deeply...it's exactly what I wanted anyway... to Gajanan Mishra: yeah, sure, why not? and thanks too...
Very nice poem. Very deep. I can tell that it is about someone we love, a dad to be precised. I can imagine your situation right thru your poem..loved it! : D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice one! Pondering too much about the difficulties will always take away the life out of life!