luciana isabelle

Rookie - 4 Points (9 february 1993 / france)

I Wonder.... - Poem by luciana isabelle

Day by day
I watch the same views
The sunrise beautifully
In front of me
Make me feel warmth
Within these extremely
Cold snow
Is this nature?

This morning
I can hear
The bird chirping clearly
Like a whisper through my ears
Bring the beautiful melodies
Within the air
Make me feel calm
Make me feel glad
Make me feel peaceful
Is this nature?

Those rivers
Look like a crystal for me
Cold but still
Make me feel comfortable
Like I’m in the heaven
Make me feel happy
Is this nature?

Yeah, it is
No. It was before.
It was indeed calm before

It was destroyed
By our hand, the irresponsible one
Until it became
Like a disaster
Truly a disaster
For the nature,
And for US too…
And again,
Is this nature?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Well, try to make something else...hope you guys like it...
Best regard!

Comments about I Wonder.... by luciana isabelle

  • Alookh (matin) (9/16/2013 3:01:00 AM)

    Wow! ! ! a perfect poem....i loved.....and its really true......nature is always generous, but we have always been too greedy to it....unfortunately we are destroying it with our hands....and we forget that it was a gift from God....i did enjoy...................thanx alot! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

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  • (8/15/2013 8:20:00 AM)

    beautiful words wrap an important message that we must address together
    and you writted very well
    thanks for sharing
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  • Luciana Isabelle (7/8/2013 12:38:00 AM)

    agreed...i'm looking forward to your poems too (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (7/7/2013 1:06:00 AM)

    Make me feel calm
    Make me feel glad
    Make me feel peaceful
    Is this nature?
    Yes, it is. When everything else goes wrong, it's the mother nature who calms, cools and comforts you.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 29, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, June 29, 2013

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