Orpheus Poem by Emmanuel George Cefai

Orpheus



Orpheus in a mist of cloud
descended to the Earth
in Hastings Gardens.

Tinkling became every leaf
and every bough
competed with the
song of the nightingales.

Ceased the nightingales
each to the other
in wonderment they looked.

The Muse from her heights
looked down to Earth
her chin was in her hand.
At first.
Then smiled.

Midnight struck and
the cloud of Orpheus
lifted itself and unto
the familiar heights it soared
as a golden vessel thousand oared

And ended the night
And came the Dawn
And smiled the Muse
and heard
Tinkling every leaf
and every bough

May Orpheus re-visit Earth
again!
And again and again

Tuesday, April 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: legends
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 25 May 2015

ORPHEUS is my chosen myth for my own existence! Jung used to ask people by what myth did they live, that phrasing is not quite right but you get the drift - There are patterns which recur again and again which the myths reveal. In your poem Orpheus descends almost like a god, certainly a demi-god, and his presence animates things and creatures. He doesn't appear to do anything beyond manifesting himself, but that is enough. It's an epiphany: for that sacred moment everyone is focused and alert, only positive emotions are felt, only good can be manifest. That's what your poem does: during the time we read it, we are filled with divine light, we shine! Although he ascends at the end, there are traces of his beauty and truth left behind, inside of us! May he return again... soon!

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