Our Ending Poem by Bonnie B Long

Our Ending

Rating: 5.0


The pain I'm feeling is so real
Why can't you understand the pain I feel
The pain is not in my head as you think
I wish I could have just one stiff drink

To drown away all this pain
So nothing but relaxation will remain
The ability to sleep all night long
Is that wish oh so wrong

A little love shown my way
In all you do and all you say
To fell that you could say you do
Means that your love for me is oh so true.

I know that this is but a dream
What you say is not what it seems
You don't understand you never will
And that piece of fact is a sour pill

You don't care though you say you do
But I need a love that is oh so true
So after all these many years
You have brought me to all these tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geoff Warden 27 February 2007

Very nicly put, flow gets just a tad stiky, but all in all a grand write

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