Friday, October 12, 2007

Our Father In Heaven Please Save Our Daughter From Herself Comments

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Daughter of ours
Destroyer
Heartbreaker
How could you?
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Ted Sheridan
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Poison 9901 12 October 2007

Ted, I feel your pain, I am right now going thru this same thing with my 13 year old son. I am his stepfather, but I think alot of his hate & aggression stems from his real fathers lack of paticapation in his life. I wish you all the best, and god knows I feel for both you and yourwife. I know how bad this hurts for me, let alone how its killing his mother. This one really touched home for me as well 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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Sweetheart that hits home. Hard. I'm ashamed to say it is like looking in the mirror a few years ago. I wish I had looked into my parents' eyes instead. Good news though. They're my best friends now..... t xxx

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fanniesson - 12 October 2007

this defiantly held my attention. Was able to see the whole innocent in my mind clearly. Not to mention the pain one would have to feel to write such a piece. Nice writing here. True or not, none of my business. as a poem worth reading more then once for me shows how to follow through with a thought.

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you make it real, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , ,

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Anna Russell 12 October 2007

Ouch! please tell me this isn't true? Hugs Anna xxx

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